Thursday, 5 March 2015

My Logline and Treatment

Title: Snow and Blood, Fox In The Snow (these are just ideas at the moment I'm still trying to settle on one but feel free to give suggestions on which you like more)

Logline: Main character loses survivors he was close too from an alien ambush and later joins a resistance group swearing vengeance on the enemy.

Treatment: The story is about an alien invasion in a frozen wasteland. Someone named Farid (alone) at the beginning of an alien invasion he was captured and after a series of horrible tortuous experiments he lost all memory of his past life and who he was. After escaping and nearly freezing to death a group of survivors recover him and keep him with them as a companion, after things go south and people dying the remaining survivors turn on Farid since he revealed his power to them and they leave him for dead. Days later Farid finds them dead in the snow and swears vengeance on the alien threat and joins another survivor group but they accept his powers and they have a military force on site called the AAF (Anti Arachnid Force).

1 comment:

  1. You need to put the 3 act structure into your storyline, while this works as an overview it is time to put the structure and flow in place. Please advance to a step outline

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